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Sunday, May 17, 2009

Her feet

The water, the gurgle,
Became a giggle,
When they touched her feet.

1 comment:

Priyanka Khot said...: This one had me smiling.

Wish to read more of ur poetry.

Take care; October 22, 2009 at 10:13 AM

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In 3 lines and few words

Hi! As you see, these posts above seem quite haiku-like. But I wouldn't claim as such. Purists might frown :) and I don't know this rule or that rule. Surely, the inspiration to pen these down has been some haikus I read recently.

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